nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

Freedom - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Life torments me day and night
never leaving me a moments rest
Oh! God if there is any above the sky
I need freedom, please listen to me
can you hear me, Freedom! Freedom!
I saw in the cold night
an aeroplane or a flying saucer
landed to the field where I stood
someone got down from the plane
and came towards me.
I asked him who are you?
He said a messenger from God
and he gave me a box of gold
which I could not hold
before I opened it, saw something written on the lid.
a gift from your forefathers
the wealth inside to all
those who have the faith in God
divide them into equal.
The box is full of money, oh! money is everything
dollars, pounds, marks, roubles, yens and et cetera.
I did not give a share to anybody and all I spent for myself.
I built a castle on the hilltop
and put a sign at the gate
'Beware of Dogs'
I am the almighty of all and ruling this world
the poor soul cried for freedom
even I am not free at all.
When he cried for freedom
I gave him money and he asked more
I gave him a spouse pure
he is nagging that she is barren
then I gave him children.
He never get satisfied ask more and more
finally I gave him the death.


Comments about Freedom by nimal dunuhinga

  • Melvina Germain (10/18/2006 11:49:00 PM)


    Very interesting, I think you are speaking of sheer greed here, whereas a person is not happy until they have it all and all is not enough either. This type of person only believes in material things and has no spiritual guidance, this person clearly needs prayer. I think you show a very clear message here, many need to read this poem.--Thankyou Nimal---Melvina (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 2, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, November 7, 2005


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