Freeze This Time! Poem by Ashika Murali Acharya

Freeze This Time!

Rating: 5.0


Wish I could just stop this time,
Freeze it now and hold it tight,
For my son who has just turned three,
Where he knows no pain nor fret,
All that binds him is supernal joy.

Before these days turn its page,
Can I pause these moments of blissful glee,
When he charge his childhood spree,
And make this charm his identity.

He talks with that birdie in the tree,
Just the way he talks to me,
Stroke her shiny coat with his hands,
And feel it's tiny beak and claws,
If at times he gets a chance.

He races to hold a chipmunks tail,
Or drives a buzzing bee to it's hive,
Crawls behind the marching ants,
And tries to find their mom and dad,
Counts the hues in the colors of a fly,
And pat a bunny on its tail,
So soft so bushy so snowy and nice.

He runs along with the wind on the field,
In the sun, in the rain, in the snow and more,
Jumps in the puddle of the last night shower,
Mess being his another name,
Smell few flowers in a flowing breeze,
And catch some sunlight in his cup,
Star lit skies theme for his dance,
A dance of joy and ecstasy.

He learns every day in his own ways,
That, all are alike -sweet and naive,
He is another part of them.
Who am I to teach him things,
For he knows magic of time and joy.
In the rain and the sun,
In the day and at night.
He illumines an eternal bliss,
And so, I want to hold this time,
Freeze it now and hold it tight.

Freeze This Time!
Wednesday, September 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,children,joy,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Child is the father of man...We learn from them in galore! The happiness of being a mom to a toddler and what i learn from him.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2018

A child learns everyday many things and beautifully reflects joy. The sun and the snow bot shine in vision. Having a plan for ceasing time is amazing. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2018

Typo...please treat both in stead of bot.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 September 2018

He learns every day in his own ways, That, all are alike -sweet and naive...fascinating expression! I admire adorable style of your penning.....10

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 September 2018

Marvellous poem on the thick bond between a mom and her child.Very vociferously and convincingly expressed. Let me quote Can I pause these moments of blissful glee When he charges his childhood spree And make this charm his identity.... Reading your lovely poem, I chanced to re-live my days when our daughter was of the same ages two or three... thank you Ashika. A 100 + for this piece of beauty. Onto MyPoemList

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 September 2018

Wow! Great poetry, Ashika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2018

your poetry is so wonderful and u give good comments kindly find some time to read mine two poems on moms and in advance thanks yes one posted to day on NIRVANA

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