Freudian Slip Poem by M.J. Lemon

Freudian Slip

Rating: 5.0


lovely lingerie
a slip that revealed so much
I kept my mouth shut

Monday, August 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: observation,psychological,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

ASK HER TO TAKE IT OFF THE WORLD MUST ENJOY HER MORE THAN POETRY ALONE MJL MISSED YOU U DON'T NOW COME ALONG WATCHING HER LINGERIE FALL MAY BE MJL WE LOVE YOU AND HER ALL

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

Great observation that silenced you. I see a satire and humor both in your 3 lines.10++

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Leeann Azzopardi 03 August 2020

I get that way when I see a naked or near naked man. Bravo!

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Kostas Lagos 03 August 2020

Excellent! Just excellent M.J!

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Susan Williams 16 August 2020

I always knew you were an intelligent man.... they are the ones who can enjoy scenery without jumping up and down and shouting and pointing! By the way, senryu becomes you! As do many other styles, but I find brevity is a hard accomplishment to conquer and you do it as easily as breathing. Excellent and worthy of an abundance of dancing 10+++++++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 14 September 2020

Thank you, Kevin! Your comment- priceless, and almost a perfect senryu.

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Kevin Patrick 11 September 2020

You might keep yours dropped but if I saw a women like that my jaws on the floor.

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Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Saved by that face mask! ! Thank you for reading, Soul!

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2020

Even if it revealing, your mouth shut or not... Face mask still on... 😆

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Mj Lemon 21 August 2020

Richard, Yes! Marilyn, Tom, and that walk down a NY street after The Creature from the Black Lagoon. Just brilliant, Richard! Thanks so much.

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