Freudian Slip Poem by M.J. Lemon

Freudian Slip

Rating: 5.0


lovely lingerie
a slip that revealed so much
I kept my mouth shut

Monday, August 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: observation,psychological,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

ASK HER TO TAKE IT OFF THE WORLD MUST ENJOY HER MORE THAN POETRY ALONE MJL MISSED YOU U DON'T NOW COME ALONG WATCHING HER LINGERIE FALL MAY BE MJL WE LOVE YOU AND HER ALL

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

Great observation that silenced you. I see a satire and humor both in your 3 lines.10++

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Kostas Lagos 03 August 2020

Excellent! Just excellent M.J!

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Leeann Azzopardi 03 August 2020

I get that way when I see a naked or near naked man. Bravo!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 August 2020

Oooh sassy and sensational, makes me think it slipped or a slip. Thumbs up! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Mj Lemon 14 September 2020

Thank you, Kevin! Your comment- priceless, and almost a perfect senryu.

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Kevin Patrick 11 September 2020

You might keep yours dropped but if I saw a women like that my jaws on the floor.

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Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Saved by that face mask! ! Thank you for reading, Soul!

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2020

Even if it revealing, your mouth shut or not... Face mask still on... 😆

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Mj Lemon 21 August 2020

Richard, Yes! Marilyn, Tom, and that walk down a NY street after The Creature from the Black Lagoon. Just brilliant, Richard! Thanks so much.

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