lovely lingerie
a slip that revealed so much
I kept my mouth shut
Great observation that silenced you. I see a satire and humor both in your 3 lines.10++
I get that way when I see a naked or near naked man. Bravo!
Oooh sassy and sensational, makes me think it slipped or a slip. Thumbs up! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.
Thank you, Kevin! Your comment- priceless, and almost a perfect senryu.
You might keep yours dropped but if I saw a women like that my jaws on the floor.
Even if it revealing, your mouth shut or not... Face mask still on... 😆
Richard, Yes! Marilyn, Tom, and that walk down a NY street after The Creature from the Black Lagoon. Just brilliant, Richard! Thanks so much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ASK HER TO TAKE IT OFF THE WORLD MUST ENJOY HER MORE THAN POETRY ALONE MJL MISSED YOU U DON'T NOW COME ALONG WATCHING HER LINGERIE FALL MAY BE MJL WE LOVE YOU AND HER ALL