Tuesday, January 23, 2007

Friends With Unseen Faces Comments

Rating: 4.8

'This is dedicated to Suzanne, Melvina, Alison and Francesca. My friends with unseen faces.'

For years my work lay hidden.
Gathering dust on my shelf.
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David Harris
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Lisa Wilkinson 30 March 2007

Would like to become one of these David, fate brought our eyes upon eachothers poems. Kind thoughts, Lisa

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2007

To all the unseen faces on poemhunter... we are all friends here... david 10

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Pam Thomas 25 February 2007

David as much as our comments have helped you I want you to know yours have helped me as well beyond measure. I love your poetic gifts that you share with us all. I do consider you a friend as well. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent. Hugs Pam

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Bob Blackwell 24 January 2007

David I echo your sentiments, the encouragement and help I have received from unseen faces, has helped. Well written well said. Bob

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Melvina Germain 24 January 2007

Oh my gosh, that touched my heart David, I have butterflies in my tummy now. You have penned a truly beautiful poem here, we never know when we touch someone but when it happens and that person lets us know, it is so nice to hear what his or her thoughts are. You have penned a beautiful tribute to all of us, I truly appreciate your heartfelt words and your sincerity. David you are an artist of literary verse my friend. You have been given a gift from the Lord, enjoy it as long as you can, please-don't put your pen down for that long again, we must continue to share our precious gifts so that we continue to touch others, especially those that don't have such gifts. Thankyou for being my friend David-Melvina-

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Alison Smith 24 January 2007

Hey we only make nice comments cause you write good poems.... No need to thank us... just keep up the good work.... Nice knowing you in this way.... Alison

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Suzanne Gaddess 24 January 2007

thanks David. very very sweet of you. I do believe that everything happens for a reason...again THANK YOU

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Alicia Patti 23 January 2007

I like the sentiment in this poem. We all need that feedback. Just thought you would like to know the following has to be changed: 'Four ladies whom have helped me.' You need to change 'whom' to 'who.' best, alicia

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Francesca Johnson 23 January 2007

This is lovely, David. Thank you. Yes, I have made lots of friends here, too, many of them inspirational. Keep writing, my friend. Love, Fran xxx

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