~ From Fathomless Skyline ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ From Fathomless Skyline ~

Rating: 4.0


~ From Fathomless Skyline ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010

From fathomless skyline
Hear deep carmine call.

My bosom like
Mellifluent octave
Swing sway why
In your melodic palm?

Your spry eyelids
Ruffle and flutter
Fluffy zephyr
Echoes ethos unzips
My bosom why?

Why these indolent
Illusionary indulgences
Creeps in me for more?

Fantasy faerie snuggle
In arms me no more
Biz buzzes kibosh n’ o’er
Better be as e’er ne’er
All izz virtual not real

O’ my chummy pal
Listen me ~ Better
Own my aching finery
In your deep recess trove
As lofty leisure luxury.

Lilt bedeck aurevoir
Open brink of gate.

Just a moment
Let me say
O’ Poetry
Go to flowers
Make them blithe happy.

A moment more
O’ lambent Venus
Sing temptingness
Affable agleam adieu.

From fathomless skyline
Hear deep call
O’ palsy-walsy
Pal listen me why not?

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Glossary: With humility some glossary given for what I tried to express.
[1] Chummy ~ [used colloquially] having the relationship of friends
[2] Faerie ~ The enchanted realm of fairies
[3] Blithe ~ Carefree and happy and lighthearted
[4] Temptingness ~ The power to entice or attract through personal charm
[5] Affable ~ Diffusing warmth and friendliness
[6] Palsy-walsy ~ [used colloquially] having the relationship of friends

Note: Spelling change is experimental.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milica Franchi De Luri 02 August 2010

I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It is a love poem with a difference, it has a little bit of erotica and a little bit of humor which contributes to it's appeal.......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2010

Why these indolent Illusionary indulgences Creeps in me for more? .... ya it is quite imagery in question but real one..makes me to ponder over.. nice enticing too....10

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Zack Krzeminski 31 July 2010

a very enticing poem for one with great imagination i give a 10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 July 2010

I'm so old I need a new dictionary.

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

abstract lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well conceived poem....

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Subbaraman N V 10 November 2010

Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import!

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Subbaraman N V 10 November 2010

Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import!

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

The voice can die out if unheard. Hope the You of this poem heard. Hope for the best, always. Be happy :)

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Marieta Maglas 13 October 2010

Wisdom manifesting itself through you, my friend, deep and excellent write!

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Kevin Carney 23 September 2010

Amazing use of words they just floated on air as I read it.Nice use of metaphors. Thank you for sharing.I am jealous I can't write half as well as you lol.

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