You came into my life
When I was down with endless strife
Gave life to my soul
And played music to make me whole
You are a part of me now
My dream and desire now
You are the flakes of my frozen moments
The most precious component
A beautiful poem dear poetess! Well composed. (Poetess Magadha)
Very nice, Rini! I love the line " gave life to my soul" . Thanks for posting.
'You are a part of me now My dream and desire now 'Emotional flow in the poem is like a stream...10
'You are the flakes of my frozen moments The most precious component'.. is such beautiful lines. Loved the way you have expressed your love.
A wonderful poem that expresses lovely feelings. Well crafted and conveyed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
VERY NICE SENTIMENTS HOPE HE READS THEM