Garden Of Love Poem by Rini Shibu

Garden Of Love

Rating: 4.7


Soul in the garden of love
It's like paradise on earth
Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet
Fresh energetic buds ready to burst
Waiting for the dawn to embrace the warmth of sun
Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee
came  near and whispered to me
Am lost in your ardent aroma..
You are my life, you are my world..
Softly kissed and tickled  to bloom my heart..
Filled me with beauty and added colors to my life..
You sucked my nectar everyday..
Flew away I couldn't see..
Filled and stored all your hive..
You have stolen all my charm...
lost my elangance
Withered on the ground never you knew
this will be the end when you return..
Does love life give only wound?

Garden Of Love
Saturday, April 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 21 May 2017

You have stolen all my charm! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 21 May 2017

Thank you Edward.....

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Richard Thomas 01 May 2017

Wow! nice poem. I look forward to read more of your thoughts put to paper. Bravo! ! I really enjoyed this work of yours.

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Rini Shibu 11 May 2017

Thanks a lot Richard

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Khairul Ahsan 30 April 2017

'You sucked my nectar Everyday' - Nice!

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020

Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee came near and whispered to me Am lost in your ardent aroma.. You are my life, you are my world.. full of passion and love. tony

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Prabir Gayen 08 February 2020

Withered on the ground never you knew this will be the end when you return.. Does love life give only wound? ... .. charming poem

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Aqua Flower 10 October 2018

Such a heartfelt poem about love and loss. The ending of the poem is the highlight of the piece. Does love life give only wound? Brilliantly penned.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2018

So lovely poem, , , , , , right 10 No narrow path Thursday,6th September 2018 it has the capacity to make it flowery Love has no narrow path it makes you breathe, freely without the fear of death and keeps intact your commitment to the faith Hasmukh Amathaal Mehta

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Rebecca Navarre 29 August 2018

Ever such beautiful heart, with such beauty within, with such beautiful love, to share and to give! .. To love so true is such a beautiful thing, even when God ends up comforting! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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