poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *genuflection *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

heavenly wishes reason to glow
enlighten soul deep within
heart knows well reeks of sorrow
words inspiring leads to light

dream onshore resurrects faster,
as gleams of bliss bestow upon
head touches feet genuflecting
as reed latches on etching smile

yet in between, lie cliff and chasm
for truth as it needs blessing divine
heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope
sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet

yet it is golden whispers let me awake
to smear dream over the soul to smooch
and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath
let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 6, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, September 6, 2009

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  • Lynda Robson (9/11/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    Tenderly written and your experience madeyou realise how fragile life is, well composed
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Kafil Uddin Raihan (9/10/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    Awesome flow....greatly enjoyed.....

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  • Shekhar JoshiShekhar Joshi (9/10/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    Excellent.......deep and meaningful..........liked it.........

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  • Eyan Desir (9/8/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    Poeetic master piece good write
    10ssss

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  • Dana Amer (9/8/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    So deep, sometimes we need something to remind us with the mercy of God, nicely written with strong phrases & structure, good job

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (9/8/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    Inspirations and blessings instill dreams in us and hopes transcend.A golden mirage looms, to reach the same we have to surmount the barriers of cliffs and chasm.But mirage will no longer be a mirage once the barriers are overcome.And Subhendu, you will surmount any barriers in the way of your poetics to grip the golden shadow or golden mirage.Fantastic as always.

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  • Keith Young (9/7/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    Great poem living another day can always make u feel better

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  • Luwi HabteLuwi Habte (9/7/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    Dr, this is so nice poem
    i love the rythm
    luwi

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  • Dr Kamran Haider (9/7/2009 9:59:00 AM)

    Loved the lines...

    heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope
    sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet

    and

    to smear dream over the soul to smooch

    Wow Sir... Great write... Masterful and surely enlightening...

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  • Surya . (9/7/2009 5:24:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.good composition and nice meanings conveyed.last para is really fine
    yet it is golden whispers let me awake
    to smear dream over the soul to smooch
    and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath
    let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within '
    voted10
    surya

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  • Sandra Fowler (9/7/2009 4:27:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing your beautiful art.
    Superb write. Poemhunter is fortunate to
    have you.10/10.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra

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  • Ken E Hall (9/7/2009 1:35:00 AM)

    Succumb to prayer enwraps the heart inturn wraps your into this lovely
    poem deep words ++++++++10
    regards

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  • Fay SlimmFay Slimm (9/6/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    After trauma of any kind 'heart sneaks slowly into hope' and you have outlined hope here and underscored it as being the way of transcendence - - excellent verse....10 from Fay

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  • Jen Capaldi (9/6/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    Wow is the first word that comes to mind when i first read this. it is truely an elegantly written heartfelt piece with both theological tones and pesonal hidden deeep inside your words. it is wonderful!
    Jen

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  • Cheryl Caron (9/6/2009 6:33:00 PM)

    but for the grace of God.....a beautiful piece....nicely done

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  • Lady Grace (9/6/2009 6:31:00 PM)

    a nice expression of saying thanks...this poem is highly appreciated..

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  • Lynn Glover (9/6/2009 5:21:00 PM)

    A very good write. I enjoyed reading genuflection and have to give you a 10. Your friend Lynn

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  • Aziz AlkaabiAziz Alkaabi (9/6/2009 4:38:00 PM)

    This is some powerful work and having carefully read your biography and some of your work, I can now understand what inspired this and call upon the golden whisperer to guard you so you keep showering us with this intelligent and delicate and fine art.

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  • saltedpeanut blanksaltedpeanut blank (9/6/2009 4:33:00 PM)

    wow great symbolism very thought invoking nice write
    Adam

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  • Afzal Shauq (9/6/2009 4:30:00 PM)

    yet it is golden whispers let me awake
    to smear dream over the soul to smooch
    and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath
    let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within

    great imaginations.. well written and the idea which seems to be a sweet fantsy is really tackled professionally.. love the way you write poems and here in this poem you proved that you are are more then a poet and things come up from the core of your sweet and kind heart.. well done dear poet friend for such a good poem..wish you never stop writing..10/10

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