! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *genuflection *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *genuflection *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.9


heavenly wishes reason to glow
enlighten soul deep within
heart knows well reeks of sorrow
words inspiring leads to light

dream onshore resurrects faster,
as gleams of bliss bestow upon
head touches feet genuflecting
as reed latches on etching smile

yet in between, lie cliff and chasm
for truth as it needs blessing divine
heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope
sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet

yet it is golden whispers let me awake
to smear dream over the soul to smooch
and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath
let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Caron 06 September 2009

but for the grace of God.....a beautiful piece....nicely done

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Jen Capaldi 06 September 2009

Wow is the first word that comes to mind when i first read this. it is truely an elegantly written heartfelt piece with both theological tones and pesonal hidden deeep inside your words. it is wonderful! Jen

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Fay Slimm 06 September 2009

After trauma of any kind 'heart sneaks slowly into hope' and you have outlined hope here and underscored it as being the way of transcendence - - excellent verse....10 from Fay

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Ken E Hall 07 September 2009

Succumb to prayer enwraps the heart inturn wraps your into this lovely poem deep words ++++++++10 regards

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Sandra Fowler 07 September 2009

Thank you for sharing your beautiful art. Superb write. Poemhunter is fortunate to have you.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2009

Tenderly written and your experience madeyou realise how fragile life is, well composed 10 Lynda xx

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 10 September 2009

Awesome flow....greatly enjoyed.....

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Shekhar Joshi 10 September 2009

Excellent.......deep and meaningful..........liked it.........

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Eyan Desir 08 September 2009

Poeetic master piece good write 10ssss

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Dana Amer 08 September 2009

So deep, sometimes we need something to remind us with the mercy of God, nicely written with strong phrases & structure, good job

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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