Getting Past The Pain Poem by mona martinez

Getting Past The Pain

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if you can understand,
you can see,

all of this hurt and pain,
i'm just sick of,

can you see,
i want to be any where but, here?

i'm sick of dealing with life,
just let me go,


let me be selffish,
i really don't care,

i'm sick of feeling this way,
i'm sick of feeling alone,

life not getting better,
just let me have my only choice,

to take away this pain for good,
i've thought of ways,

where i won't return,
just let me be,

i'll see you in another life,
a life that is better than this,


because by the end of each day,
i try my hardest to remain,

but, it just harder to stay,
when all you really want,

is to take this pain away,
that deep inside,

that won't subside,
no matter if i cry,

no matter how hard i try,
i just can't get past this pain.
Copyright © 2009
5-20-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

if you can understand, you can see, all of this hurt and pain, i'm just sick of, .........it is unbearable and only can be shed with tears.... beautiful pain language... i like it......10 read mine 'Cry not' may to marry'

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

Forget pains, Mona...but don't forget the scars...let them remain there...for next time when you are hurt there, you won't feel any pain...you smile! well, where are they now who wanted to hurt you there? Poignant piece...thanks...10

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this is your most excellently writtten poem... ever..

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