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Rating: 4.8
As I wake up
And adjust my eyes
From deep sleep
To daylight
I see a ghost
In front of me

I say
Am I dead
Am I alive
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Karen Deeks 13 March 2012
Beautiful writing on sleep in a context I've never considered before, even though when I was eight I woke and saw a young boy watching me, around the time my nan passed over.., food for thought indeed. Karen
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Poet Of The River 02 March 2012
yes, i like the way this one is put together. it is a interesting concept. keep up the good work. we are all looking forward to reading more of your talented work. :) ash
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Marlon Janaway 01 March 2012
Astral projection. Visitation. I love the idea of the conscious mind transcending the physical body, either through death or meditation. For me this poem is potent in atmosphere.
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Ramesh Rai 28 February 2012
Exactly, a man is like a dead when he is asleep. As per indian myth, the soul wonders when we are asleep.
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Neela Nath Das 28 February 2012
Your poem is very nice.Ghost is your altar ego.We the Indian Hindus too believe that when we sleep our soul roams.
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Rishit Desai 28 February 2012
Very thought provoking indeed.
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Marquita Smalls 28 February 2012
i like i like we are a ghost to ourselves
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Excellent write... it suggests that reality is but a reflection of our dreams and vice versa! ... well done
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Danny Draper 27 February 2012
A gentle and evocative poem. You may like to read my poem, I could not sleep, which is along a similar theme with a different take. Great work.
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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 February 2012
Exemplary! There are two type of Ghosts Dead & living!
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