Ghost In The Afternoon Poem by Sonya Florentino

Ghost In The Afternoon

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I saw a young man today
In an outdoor café
Who reminded me of you

And though I knew he wasn’t you
(For you never wore a hat)
He looked so much like you
It made my heart stop

The same smug look
The same strong jaw
Dark hair, dark eyes
I start to see shadows….

I wanted to come closer
To look at him- stare at him
Find out how much more
You look like him

As the past took over the present
And memories flooded my senses…

Then suddenly I realized
He might think it strange
That a woman like me-
A woman my age…

So with one last look
I closed my eyes
And quickly walked away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 17 July 2009

Beautiful Sonya. Touching, heartfelt rendition of how memories do affect us. No matter the distance in time. I love this poem. Thank you very much for sharing. :)

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Lynda Robson 16 July 2009

You have a wonderful insight into life Sonya, this reminds me of when we lose someone close and look for them in a crowd, wishful thinking I suppose, great poem, 10 Lynda xx

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Paul Hansford 14 July 2009

A moment most of us (of a certain age) will recognise. Touching and sad in a smiley kind of way.

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Ruth Walters 12 July 2009

I've done that! Great poem, kind of sad but thought provoking.....kept me interested all the way through to the very last syllable! Ruthy: -)

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Laurie Hill 07 July 2009

So intriguing, a memory comes to life in the face of a stranger

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

The worst is when you see somebody who exactly resembles your relative who has passed on. Because along with the feeling of recognition, comes a sensation of just how much you have lost out of your life..not pleasant at all. And yes, our age causes us to stop often- the fear of looking ridiculous seems to outweigh a lot of other concerns, doesn't it? I have a triple dose of that I think.

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Rakesh Bedi 12 August 2009

Because ones sub-conscious is Aware.......! ! !

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

Hi Sonya, I love it and can feel it. This has definitely gone into my personal favourites. Thank you

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 July 2009

Love it. full of what ifs and might off beens

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R. Manoj Mohan 25 July 2009

Sometimes we all feel this way when we find a familiar face among the crowd, only to realize later that we were mistaken. Strange, but the same applies to both the ones we love and used to love...

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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