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Ginger Bread Babies, Ginger Bread Pets

Rating: 3.7
And my imagination shapes you
Kneading you to need me
Like I need you so
Mould the clay
Mould the dough

Who are you?
I don’t know
We have never met

But I have faith
I will find you yet
We’ll make ginger bread babies
And ginger bread pets
Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2015
Nice work with the muse of your imagination.
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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 August 2015
Beautiful poem with a very skillful use of imagery...Hope you get to make real babies and not just gingerbread babies...
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Ramesh T A 25 August 2015
What an imagination based on bread making with human relationship to be made soon!
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David Wood 25 August 2015
Lovely use of metaphor with molding clay and dough. Lovely poem keep it up.
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Kim Barney 25 August 2015
Clever line: kneading you to need me and a clever, fascinating poem. But I would like to know more about you, Amy Murtagh. How old were you when you wrote the poem? Did you find the person you were kneading (and needing) ? Do you still write? You haven't submitted anything to this site for more than nine years.
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Duncan Wyllie 06 February 2006
I agree with David this is a great part of a great poem.Top marks Love Duncan
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David Gerardino 06 February 2006
My imagination shapes you Kneading you to, great line, great poem.
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