And my imagination shapes you
Kneading you to need me
Like I need you so
Mould the clay
Mould the dough
Who are you?
I don’t know
We have never met
But I have faith
I will find you yet
We’ll make ginger bread babies
And ginger bread pets
My imagination shapes you Kneading you to, great line, great poem.
I agree with David this is a great part of a great poem.Top marks Love Duncan
Beautiful poem with a very skillful use of imagery...Hope you get to make real babies and not just gingerbread babies...
What an imagination based on bread making with human relationship to be made soon!
Lovely use of metaphor with molding clay and dough. Lovely poem keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Clever line: kneading you to need me and a clever, fascinating poem. But I would like to know more about you, Amy Murtagh. How old were you when you wrote the poem? Did you find the person you were kneading (and needing) ? Do you still write? You haven't submitted anything to this site for more than nine years.