Ginger Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ginger Love

Rating: 5.0


You are a dream
fallen from the sky
of my own treasure
I submerged in your arms
you threw me away,
down into a pit of love
too steep to climb,
I struggle with life now.

You're a gentle chameleon
that changes colour more often
by sucking my wishes
from the pumping hopes
that lay beneath my heart
your smug half smile flukes
now wandering in the valley
of the fire with half burned desires.

Sunday, March 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 06 March 2016

The use of metaphor GINGER is amusing.....the features of ginger fits to love stricken people and they need bitter treatment...100

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2016

Of my own treasure; with the ways of life. Nice work.

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Michael Jack 23 July 2020

Wonderful poem, title is fascinating.10

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Darren Jkoeryo 18 March 2016

Ginger love an interesting write.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 March 2016

Wow! ..... I love the energy and the passionate tone of this poem! Lovely!

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Valsa George 07 March 2016

The sourness, sweetness and the helplessness of being in love is expressed in beautiful images! I liked the title of the poem too! A 10

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Nosheen Irfan 07 March 2016

Another beautiful write on love. Love is often difficult..It's not always smooth n even. Enjoyed reading it. You have put your feelings into words with amazing expression.

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