You are a dream
fallen from the sky
of my own treasure
I submerged in your arms
you threw me away,
down into a pit of love
too steep to climb,
I struggle with life now.
You're a gentle chameleon
that changes colour more often
by sucking my wishes
from the pumping hopes
that lay beneath my heart
your smug half smile flukes
now wandering in the valley
of the fire with half burned desires.
Wow! ..... I love the energy and the passionate tone of this poem! Lovely!
The sourness, sweetness and the helplessness of being in love is expressed in beautiful images! I liked the title of the poem too! A 10
Another beautiful write on love. Love is often difficult..It's not always smooth n even. Enjoyed reading it. You have put your feelings into words with amazing expression.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The use of metaphor GINGER is amusing.....the features of ginger fits to love stricken people and they need bitter treatment...100