Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 53,117 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

Give Me... - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Give me the thunder of your passion
The touch of your breath
The fire of your gaze
The salt of your tears

I want to have you in your entirety
Not just the pieces of you
Give me the key to your soul
Unlock the doors of your mystery

Give me the sunlight of your existence
The shade of your affection
The shelter of your promises
The spring of your loyalty

I want to have you as a certainty
As a hard concrete wall
Unchanged tomorrow, firmly rooted
Into the land under my feet

If nothing else
Give me the pain that consumes you
On lonely nights, on dreary days.


Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Topic(s) of this poem: love, passion, romance


Comments about Give Me... by Nosheen Irfan

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/25/2016 5:36:00 AM)


    Love and passion! Give me what i want. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (2/4/2016 10:10:00 PM)


    Lovely expression of passionate feelings! The poem has an easy flow and unlaboured ease! An affirmation of a willingness to share the joys as well as sorrows of the loved one. A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Akshat Shukla (1/29/2016 11:04:00 AM)


    If nothing else
    Give me the pain that consumes you
    On lonely nights, on dreary days... I really appreciate your competence in comprehending the delicateness of the theme of love.
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  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/29/2016 4:23:00 AM)


    sigh! we all crave fot that eternal emotional support and love. That never ending feeling of being loved, supported and cherished for life time. Sensitive emotions beautifully penned down.10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 29, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, March 25, 2016


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