Come, The Day Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Come, The Day

Rating: 4.9


Oh come, the day
come in my arms
I long to feel
the light as though
it's mine
Come, the words
in a waterfall
strike the pebbles
with all your love
I'm empty
as an un-sung joy
come, fill me
with poems.

Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Wednesday, April 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: words,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 30 January 2019

Awesome......Ray of hope and with full of positivity this poem goes straight to my favourite place..Congrats Dear Nosheen Ji...100+++

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Richard Wlodarski 30 January 2019

There is such great beauty in the succinctness of this poem. A very well deserved Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Nosheen!

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2019

A longing for fulfillment of desires nicely articulated. Thanks & Congrats.

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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2019

A fabulous poem - -it is as if I am asking the day with its yellow light.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Barry Middleton 06 April 2017

Being the morning person that I am, I like this one very much.I do most of my writing in the mornings. I like the way you blend sensual images with inspiration here.

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Bill Cantrell 11 November 2023

Excellent and such an uplifting poem

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Kingsley Egbukole 22 September 2023

Short and beautifully crafted.

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Anjandev Roy 22 September 2023

This is absolutely beautiful.....thanks for sharing...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 September 2022

I am not exaggerating. You are a genuine poet. A blessed soul. Go ahead! !

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Sandra Feldman 14 September 2022

As unforgettable and great as I have never encountered before. The stars pale, at the spiritual greatness found in this brilliant Gem.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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