Glamorous Sin Poem by V P Mahur

Glamorous Sin

Rating: 5.0


The world of glamor
Is the world
Where all appear
Attractive and shining
Beautiful and enchanting
But a few know
That everything is
Pompous show
Not made for a simple fellow
This a blazing darkness
Where gloomy happiness
Is prevailed all around
And in disguise
There is a hidden hound
With the sharp teeth of
A merciless kindness
Behind these shining curtains
There are the remains
Alive dead bodies
Whose souls are smashed
And all the dreams
Safely crashed
Dumb are their mouths
Their honor their purity
Their joy their chastity
Their everything is stained
And their own guilt
Like the claws of a wild
Tear them
They again and again repent
Why they didn’t heed
To the warning
Why they showed the greed
Of becoming a shining star
And the worst sinful seed
They have sowed
This guilt they have to bear
With head and soul bowed

Wednesday, March 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: world
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on March 05,2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nika Mcguin 05 March 2014

I agree with Barbara, the imagery here was excellent. I also enjoyed the oxymoron usage here and the usage of form to draw in the reader. Well done! ~Nika

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Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Great poem, amazing descriptive lines and imagery.. There is a hidden hound, with the sharp teeth of a merciless kindness, brilliant imagery.10+

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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