Incomplete Picture Poem by V P Mahur

Incomplete Picture

Rating: 5.0


How can I draw your picture
For you appear
On my heart’s screen
Creating variety of scene
Sometimes you look like
A pretty singing bird
Sweetening the senses
With your musical
Rhythmical prances
Often you appear
Like a shining star
Showing path to my stray soul

Often in the orchard
Of my heart
You blossom like flower
Colorful, and smelling
Beautiful and smiling
Sometimes you make me start
With your cheering dart
Now tell me
Which picture I should paint
So your real recognition
I can clearly mention
To get your loving attention

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on March 03,2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Heartfelt poem, beautifully written and very descriptive! Love it.

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Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Heartfelt poem, beautifully written and very descriptive! Love it.

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Cassandra Jasmine 02 March 2014

So descriptive and as Beach Girl stated, the lines Like a shining star Showing path to my stray soul were beautiful!

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Tanya Gupta 02 March 2014

once again a descriptive peice of your.no one can paint a picture of their loved ones, for they are always moving in our mind......excellently penned with wonderfull thought..............love your poems.........thanks

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Beach Girl 02 March 2014

What a touching and beautiful picture you drew with this lovely romantic poem. I enjoyed, 'Often you appear Like a shining star Showing path to my stray soul.'

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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