Thank you once again for new, new venture,
Adventure is love in climbing a peak denture.
Debenture is received and assets are secured,
To illness here sure poetic medicine has cured.
Assured everything is here in peace and love,
Poem Hunter you fly across globe like dove.
Above you fly getting grace of God every day,
Bay sings, island treasures, attention we pay.
Way we walk with you too we get ray of light,
Play here with words and pray God, day night.
Bright day adores you night dreams you more,
Core of heart opens door of beat in pretty shore.
Your wings shine in golden rays, you go green,
Clean mind receives waves of God, love is seen.
Lean we before Lord for green and pure Earth,
Scene of beauty motivates mind we are in mirth.
Some say well, some say badly, but we are right,
Some say it is not of merit but we are not in fright.
Poet hears sound of soul; his poem is freedom art,
Rhyme or forced rhyme or prose poem pulls his cart.
Poem of any structure beats heart of a nice reader,
Poem Hunter you go green you are the best leader.
Dear poets go green having wisdom of our God,
Keen interest we hold for Zion before him we nod.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,24 November 2017. All rights reserved.
This new poem completes harmoniously your ''Poem of the Day''.
Great words of Thanksgiving, Kumarmani. Greening, like poetry, leads to renewal. A terrific poem!
I like a whole lot both the words and the green photograph. Poem Hunter poets have the wisdom of God, as you say. Many have the knowledge of God as well. You are one of these, I think.
(E) Three poems in one month as The Poem of The Day, we must pray to God's generous Blessings. Poems make us very rich inside, that we can feel, those who see God's wonderful LOVE. Thank you for sharing your gifts, Sir! Gratefully yours from the core of my being, a BIG TEN for you, your words and above all, your energy and love to do these poetic creations. Faithfully, Sylvia Frances Chan - 25 NOV 2017-from my notes in myLaptop
(D) ...TODAY, Dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, I finish my comment for your poem GO GREEN, POEM as I intended on that day the 25 NOV 2017- due to things I did not understand about PH postings, that's why this is postponed till TODAY 7 FEB 2019. Continued]TODAY, Dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, Please read (E)
(C) ...Comment for: GO GREEN POEM…/AD 25 Nov 2017. (This is a repetition of the same notes.- 7 FEB 2019) WOW! I am bedazzled by all these words, such an innner beauty. Green is my fav. color next to red, but this is an absorbing loveliest creation of thy pen, Sir! The photograph is a fascinating view of green. God gives you a very lot of Blessings in Abundance, that I know, Sir! ............PH dates as 6 Feb but at my place it is already 7 Feb
(B) ....TODAY Thursday the 7th Feb 2019 and this is my complete comment for that day for GO GREEN POEM by you. Thank you for your understanding and live. This below I had posted already on that day, BUT here comes the rest and that must still be posted/published for your GO GREEN POEM TOO. Best wishes from Sylvia Frances Chan - AD.7 Feb 2019-
there is a mistake in the second line: must be] understanding and LOVE and not live. Thank you.
(A) Comment for GO GREEN POEM: by Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir…/AD 25 Nov 2017- REPUBLISHED as I have not fully posted, these notes are from my NOTES for YOU (please read as: from my laptop I saved) Thank you. I know you will understand, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. TODAY
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wish this one also gets picked as the next POD sir. Thanks for sharing the poem. Regards. Subhas