God Poem by Ravi Panamanna

God

Rating: 4.6


Among the books
I was in long search.
Beyond the lines
He was only an understanding.

Among the stars
I was in a long exploration.
Beyond the black holes
He was all a background radiation.

Among the micro world
I was in deep research.
Beyond the Quantum world
He was all an energy field.

In the laws of the universe
His intelligence was ever felt.
Within the mechanisms of life
His lingering presence was felt.

Yet, within the web of reasoning
I was an encircling bird.
Beyond the glimpses of truth
His pulses to me were faint.

Then I closed my books,
Put my pen down and cartload of knowledge.
I peeped out of my window
And decided to take an evening stroll.

I went out to the open dales,
New springs were seen, voices heard.
And in the whispering wind of life
His loving touch was ever felt.

I returned home, contended,
I realized the following truth.
God is intelligence behind Natural laws,
He is pure wisdom behind the movement of life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I absolutely love the last two lines-what an epiphany! ! ! ! ! ! A ten from me very introspective poem! ! ! ! !

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Subroto Chatterjee 28 April 2009

Yes sir, a brisk or a long walk can bring us closer to God..He is there, and yet remains a mystery...and yet so familiar....Each of us have had our personal experiences of God. Yours are so musical and charming! ! I'm loving it! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 April 2009

A poem with searching wisdom. This was how the search for God started in ancient times. 'Poorna madam, poorna midam Poornaath, poorna mudathchyathe Poornasaya, poorna maadaya Poorne mevava shishaya the'

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Eyan Desir 28 April 2009

This is a great poem This is class Full marks Good writin Dear Poet

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C. P. Sharma 27 April 2009

True, you can have His feel, you cannot realize Him through others experience or intellectual gymnasts. Wonderful exposition. Thank you for sharing it. CP

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 May 2009

This is a wonderful poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 02 May 2009

Poem paints a good picture of GODS magnitude. GOD is all. Enerything is GOD. GODS intelligent spirit energy formed matter living. Never ending infinite presence in everything.

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Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

A well thought out poem...finely constructed.....great craft!

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 April 2009

A well structured poem with a meaning content. Good write.

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A touching theology that is well written!

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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