God Of Thunder Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

God Of Thunder

Rating: 5.0


The lakes blue ripples display their gleam
Sun rays reflecting upon them with ease
Small to minute current rolls
But with naked eye barely seen
The shoreline was edged uneven
With sand and rock making borderlines
Drawing the earths natural seperation's
Of the water and the sod-So Divine
The electricity arrived in thin air's ozone
And thunder claps-in the distance borne
Soon-the lightening flash could be seen
Striking the lakes blue gleam
Flashing zig-zags of lightening bolts
Echoing Thor's Thudding screams!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 16 May 2017

a poem of a magical but dangerous event? ......................wonderfully penned

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Patricia Gale 24 June 2007

Fantastic imagery, wow I could see it all through your words!

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Dr John Celes 24 June 2007

Well done, dear Theo, You have an astounding way of describing things that could be electifying and amazing the reader. Keep writing more and more With time, you can be even better. 'Poetry is a gift of God to His selected, beloved few! ' Dr John Celes

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