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Going Beyond The Life

Rating: 5.0
You've gifted me
a flinty world
of ‘bland' emptiness,

yet
your hidden blessings
have powered me

to feel-
there is in that
something more real

than the everyday's
illusory truths
of cheer and wretchedness.
Sunday, May 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,life
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COMMENTS
Doris Cornago 20 November 2018
Hi Chandan. This poem makes me cry as I think of my mom who was gone just the other month. There's a story in your poems that everybody can relate to, illusory yet as realistic as grief as this poem is. Thank you for the recall, though painful.
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Perdita Young 15 September 2018
Love this poem for its poetic power. Nice weekend from Perdita.
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Chandan Dey 16 September 2018
Thanks Perdita for your inspiring comment. Stay blessed always. Chandan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 June 2018
You've gifted me a flinty world of ‘bland' emptiness…captivating poetic expression! A sweet poem! Loved reading it…10
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Chandan Dey 08 June 2018
Dear poet, thank you very much for your precise as well as inspiring comment. Chandan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 June 2018
A highly imaginative poem touching to spirituality has been nicely and touchingly presented. Thank you dear Chandan for posting this gem.10
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Chandan Dey 08 June 2018
Thank you sir, your comment touches my heart. Chandan
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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2018
I feel inspired by your style of writing. I like the rhyme of profundity and spiritual reality of the piece. A beautiful rhetorical poem. Thanks for sharing Chandan.
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Chandan Dey 08 June 2018
Dear Chinedu, I appreciate your comment. Chandan
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 June 2018
A flinty world! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Chandan Dey 08 June 2018
Dear poet, Thank you very much for your comment. Chandan
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2018
yet your hidden blessings have powered me... from the wretched to goodness and light and power...... again the same theme in different words and imagination........ thank u dear poet. i am happy after reading your poem. tony
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Chandan Dey 08 June 2018
Dear poet Tony, I'm happy too reading your comment. Chandan
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 May 2018
WOW TO YOU WE ALL BOW SUCH EXCELLENT VERSE HOW I WISH I HAD COMPOSED IT GREAT POET COMPOSE MORE LIKE THIS
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Chandan Dey 01 June 2018
Dear poet, thank you so much for such an inspiring comment. Chandan
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