Golden Skies... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Golden Skies...

Rating: 5.0


I wanna dance on water... Wanna
drift across time.. Wanna dance
with my shadow, across the oceans
ever ringing deep chimes...
Letting it carry us...
Letting ourselves come alive...
To a simpler place, in our hearts
and in our minds. That only we can
find. My shadow And I, under the
golden pines... And across the
golden skies...

Thursday, November 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

To a simpler place, in our hearts and in our minds.....abode of peace!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2017

Oh, what a beautiful poem it is! Touchingly inscribed filling with fun. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Your Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! :) Your Poetry So Beautifully Moves, Inspires, Touches Hearts Deep! ! ! ! ! With The Beauty You Paint And Speak! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)

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Susan Williams 03 December 2017

Oh! This was immediately uplifting and lovely- -lovely in theme, lovely in expression, lovely in presentation. I wish I could give this a hundred tens because it has that indefinable something that makes it stand out in the crowd of poems here. It makes me feel instantly good inside.10 X 1000! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 03 December 2017

Thank You Dear Susan, For Your Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Blushed By! ! ! ! ! :) Always Wish You Warmth And Joy Within! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Wow! ! ! ! ! So Beautifully Paints, With The Words You Say, That Sweep The Heart Away! ! ! ! ! With The Beauty Of Nature Every Day! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much Dear Friend! ! ! ! ! Hope/Wish Pray...Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! Always! ! ! ! ! :)

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Xiangu HHE 30 November 2017

Lovely! Me and my shadow will dance along, with you and yours......

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Rebecca Navarre 01 December 2017

Thank You! ! ! Xiangu, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Poetry Page! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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