Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 382,636 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Gone Very Far - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Once in million years one prophet is sent
With long wait almighty makes one strong movement
His emissary is sent to propagate love message
His work and messages are remembered through out the ages

Like galaxy of stars they have stayed in the minds of people
Taken all blunts to self and saved people from agony and troubles
How many faiths are there on the surface of earth?
With different culture and followers to provide fresh breath

Somewhere down the lines they have provided rightful means
So much blood was shed and many battles were made to win
Ultimate goal was to bring people under one umbrella or roof
Make them to believe in one faith by proving worth with proof

In recent history of mankind one great soul descended on earth
It took over complete world by surprise with easy breath
She was later on known as mother and proved to be precise
For orphans, destitute and downtrodden she was tall promise

Nothing to self and everything to mankind with symbol of peace
Whole world recognized her dedication and selfless service
Word was charity and action was to wipe off the tears
Children were to be offered all care and no more agony or pain to bear

Such type of kind mother is not among us today
Yet we go on with same mission all the way
World has realized the hidden message form her death
Whole life of selfless service with no attachment to any faith

We must all pay tribute to such peace emissary
Without her we should have failed in delivering necessary
Health care, education and home for homeless
We find the satisfaction on mother's shining face

Many statesmen have born and disappeared
Many god fathers have taken birth and forgotten
Mother may remain in vast sky as shining star
Her dream may realize one day even if she has gone very far


Comments about Gone Very Far by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/13/2012 8:42:00 PM)


    seema chowdhury
    Expressive write, well composed.

    Bindu Rai.TrUsT EXCELLENT...WONDERFUL AS ALWAYS...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2012 7:15:00 PM)


    mrs parikh wonderful

    iram khan very nice.

    o « Delete » Dakshinamoorthy nice to remember mother Teressa
    rak Nice..thank you

    6 hours ago « Delete » LOLLO BOGEA Nice 10000000000

    Eu Só thank u my dear friend

    Chérie Bérry Dendtler Such a beautiful heart and soul...God Bless ? 5 seconds ago · Like
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2012 7:15:00 PM)


    J UnitedPoets AndArtists Wow! Very nicely done! Really like this! 38 minutes ago · Like (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2012 11:52:00 PM)


    Alma Delacruz Gossman An amazing tribute dear Hasmukh Mehta, this comes at the perfect time, as I have been offered an opportunity to give of myself to India at a school...and I am looking into it seriously...a crossroad in my life with many indicators telling me to do so....so your tribute here was a guidepost for me...thank you so very much for sharing...all things happen for a reason, and my life is taking a new shift. I do appreciate you sharing and conveying such an important and vital message. The world needs to make the same shift...one by one...collectively, we can all ascend...?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2012 10:08:00 AM)


    Re: Beautiful people (Score: 1)
    by Zbird on Tuesday, April 10,2012 (08: 04: 57)
    we have a saying here in America that beauty is as beauty does and this poem shows that very well. I have met people I thought were beautiful (outside) and then they showed to be mean spirited selfish people and when I looked at them I saw ugliness. But the most homely on the outside become beautiful when they show kindness and love towards others. I do love this poem!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2012 8:51:00 AM)


    Once in million years one prophet is sent
    With long wait almighty makes one strong movement
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 10, 2012



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