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I take a hammer and use it excessively
On a plate of reality, the plate gets fragmented
The fragmentation is an illusion
And i am trapped in it
As the universe is an indivisible whole
Everything is interconnected
Nothing exists separately including good and bad
And the hammer is nothing but my thought
The agent which defines the movement
Of thought and meaning,

And takes things and situations in isolation
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 February 2014

A great philosophical poem. We can always be good if we try. Nice to read yor poem again.

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Shahzia Batool 23 March 2014

concrete images are used for abstract suggestions...good work!

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Shania K. Younce 13 March 2014

A very well write. Bien!

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Ruby Mostazir 02 March 2014

i really like the idea of hammer and plate....you hv written it so brilliantly. really good poem.... :)

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hammer is nothing but my thought Universe is one indivisible entity. Beautifully stated. Thank you.

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Tribhawan Kaul 25 February 2014

Nothing exists separately including good and bad And the hammer is nothing but my thought........beautiful lines. A philosophical poem. Very nice.

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