Good Bye Dad Poem by saadat tahir

Good Bye Dad

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Today i say final farewell...its our traditional farewell memorial dinner for the departed soul....age old tradition.... the fortieth day of mourning

The rocky shore extended to the sea.
The town of Camarine from far we see,
And fenny lake, undrain'd by fate's decree.
In sight of the Geloan fields we pass,
And the large walls, where mighty Gela was;
Then Agragas, with lofty summits crown'd,
Long for the race of warlike steeds renown'd.
We pass'd Selinus, and the palmy land,
And widely shun the Lilybaean strand,
Unsafe, for secret rocks and moving sand.
At length on shore the weary fleet arriv'd,
Which Drepanum's unhappy port receiv'd.
Here, after endless labors, often toss'd
By raging storms, and driv'n on ev'ry coast,
My dear, dear father, spent with age, I lost:
Ease of my cares, and solace of my pain,
Sav'd thro' a thousand toils, but sav'd in vain
The prophet, who my future woes reveal'd,
Yet this, the greatest and the worst, conceal'd;
And dire Celaeno, whose foreboding skill
Denounc'd all else, was silent of the ill.
This my last labor was. Some friendly god
From thence convey'd us to your blest abode.'

Book 3
Aeneid
Virgil

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 23 August 2009

A sad and painful farewell, that of a son to his father. The end of a chapter in your life, yet the book is not finished. Your father guides you on your journey, from the other side of eternity, but still very much a part of your life. You are his legacy, and a fine one it is, Saadat. I'm sure he is very proud of the son he nurtured into a caring, compassionate human being. May he rest in peace, and may you find your peace, also. Linda

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Sonya Florentino 23 August 2009

w're there with you Saadat, bidding him good journey to peace....

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Ruth Walters 23 August 2009

This beautiful poem is a wonderful tribute to your father. Wishing you a long, healthy and happy life Saadat. Ruthy

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 August 2009

Dear Saadat... We all say farewell to your dad. I am so very glad that your dad has given such a great son to this world.. world needs people like you to make this world a beautiful place.. you father's soul will rest in peace Saadat.. love shan

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Yelena M. 20 August 2009

may the soul of your father rest in peace, Saadat..a poem for eternity, indeed.. A.

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Cigeng Zhang 22 April 2016

Sad and touching. Hope poetry here could help release the sadness. In a child's heart, too hard to say goodbye to dad. The deep love will be always there. May your dad rest in peace forever.

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Hannah Barton 21 December 2010

Wonderful. I thought of my dad when I read this.: (

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Rinki Nandy 30 June 2010

Carefully used words revealing the sorrow at loss and past memories of togetherness, what was once shared can be shared again but spritually. Life just gets mysterious and unpredictable unveiling secrets with each passing moment, amazing tribute. Newer finds and truth are only constant. Sorry for your loss.

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Alison Cassidy 25 December 2009

Saadat, it is said that powerful emotions trigger the creative soul like nothing else. Surely this is the case in this beautiful tribute to your dear father. Your metric flow is flawless. The poetic style of your words, impeccable. The poem could have been penned a thousand years ago - and yet its message is timeless. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Indira Babbellapati 28 August 2009

...farewell! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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