Good Night My Child Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Good Night My Child

Rating: 5.0


I see you creeping above to the sun so bright
Though you failed to hug the sun
But you came down with a warm sunlight.
I see you peeping out through the windows
Though you failed to touch the Milky Ways
But you went to your bed with moonlight.
I see you beeping from space to the earth
With the missed hugs, touches and kisses
I know you are dreaming the speed of light!
I see you sleeping in a suit with stitched diamonds
Though you failed to kiss the twinkling stars
Your smile says you're thinking, so good night!

Good Night My Child
Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,future
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 25 April 2018

Beautiful poem on smile of moon and the diamonds in the sky

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2018

I know you are dreaming the speed of light! I see you sleeping in a suit with stitched diamonds Though you failed to kiss the twinkling stars Your smile says you're thinking, so good night! .......loved these lines. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 April 2018

A very imaginative write with compelling imagery. Enjoyed reading it.10

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 25 April 2018

'A suit with stitched diamonds'...... a beautiful phrase to describe the star studded sky!

0 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

I appreciate the comments of esteemed poets below! it's a beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing dear sir!

0 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 April 2018

Dear Akhtar, such a wonderful poem....10++++

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success