Green Valley Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Green Valley

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The Green valley of life lies here
Between sin and paradise
But the paths always thrust us to sheer.
Where should you then ride your cart?
If you've love and despair in heart
Where must have you tied the strings
Of the ebbs and the flows.
But always the face glows
With a love song the soul sings
Here bloom my life's flower,
For The Almighty gave me the power
Sometimes sitting under a heavy-shower,
Like a lonely love-sower
To moisten the warm petals of soul.
For they can reach their goal.

Saturday, November 12, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: almighty,despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 13 November 2011

The metal heart of you too strong to endure all pain, but transparent enough to see the blood color inside..too red and crimson (wooo..'Crimson Love' must like this write hahaha) ..Somehow when you speak in paper..the ink fertile the emotion, and it grow the green feelings..so organic! ! but not organic to decay hahahaha :) good write Vipins_Unwritten Soul

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