David Wood

Gold Star - 13,799 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Haiku 12 - Poem by David Wood

When man puts himself
Above God all his efforts
And plans come to nought.


Comments about Haiku 12 by David Wood

  • (6/25/2013 2:24:00 PM)


    Found out that Japanese Haiku is 5-7-5- but some poets decided to go against it,
    and now it's any way you want! But I reckon 5-7-5- is better?
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  • Paul Brookes (6/25/2013 4:01:00 AM)


    10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (6/25/2013 4:00:00 AM)


    10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (6/25/2013 3:59:00 AM)


    10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/24/2013 6:19:00 PM)


    it still is a lovely thought. God is always first (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (6/24/2013 3:15:00 PM)


    You are right Kevin an omission on my part. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2013 2:07:00 PM)


    Very true! Only complaint David is that Haiku is 17 syllables 5-7-5- or so I was told? (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2013 1:06:00 PM)


    Awesome speech we want more (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2013 6:23:00 AM)


    So so true. Fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/24/2013 5:45:00 AM)


    Man must realize his role to bring peace. Thoughtful haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/24/2013 5:06:00 AM)


    good and heart touching, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013


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