Haiku 12 Poem by David Wood

Haiku 12

Rating: 5.0


When man puts himself
Above God all his efforts
And plans come to nought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 24 June 2013

good and heart touching, thanks.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2013

Man must realize his role to bring peace. Thoughtful haiku.

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Dave Walker 24 June 2013

So so true. Fantastic poem.

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R.j. Wynn 24 June 2013

Awesome speech we want more

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Kevin Halls 24 June 2013

Very true! Only complaint David is that Haiku is 17 syllables 5-7-5- or so I was told?

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Kevin Halls 25 June 2013

Found out that Japanese Haiku is 5-7-5- but some poets decided to go against it, and now it's any way you want! But I reckon 5-7-5- is better?

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Paul Brookes 25 June 2013

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

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Paul Brookes 25 June 2013

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

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Paul Brookes 25 June 2013

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

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Heather Wilkins 24 June 2013

it still is a lovely thought. God is always first

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