Haiku 14 - A Dream, Only A Dream Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 14 - A Dream, Only A Dream

Rating: 5.0


Rat in the attic,
Toad in the abandoned well
Dreaming rule town? joke!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Those destined to be the master of his own world should not be greedy for a bigger world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 February 2022

An amazing haiku.....liked the humor.......5 stars

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Queeny Gona 09 January 2020

Poignant read sir. I am privileged to read your work.

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Thank you Queeny. Alms ofDiamond is one of my new poems. I will remain indebted to you for reading my poems.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2019

Toad in the abandoned well and the Rat. execptional imagination my dear Parameswaran. thank you always. tony

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Thank you very much Tony. We should always be aware of our limitations. It is greed that makes us aspire for anything beyond our reach

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Savita Tyagi 10 February 2019

Excellent haiku. A realistic thought! But who can control the dreams! And who can control the miracles!

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Yes, dear Savithaji, dreams cannot be restrained and at the same time miraculous materialisation of dreams also cannot be restricted. But, it is unfair to go for undeserving things though it is praiseworthy to aim high as the sky. Thank you

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Valsa George 08 February 2019

It is not a rare possibility! We have rats very often in the attic!

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Thank you Valsa George, in that case a pied piper will incarnate. Ha...Haa...Haaa

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