Haiku - 30 Setting Sun Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 30 Setting Sun

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Setting sun planning
to rest in the arms of moon
darkness will dance now

Tuesday, December 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 19 May 2016

well.. this is not a proper haiku, dear Asim - metaphors/similes should be avoided in classical haiku

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

Lovely haiku! With sunset, darkness spreads. Though moon is there, sun is asleep!

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Free Bird 01 December 2015

Such a pretty haiku.rising of night and sun setting always Fascinate the writer.

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Shakil Ahmed 01 December 2015

yes when sun sets moon appears in the sky but still darkness falls in the ground, beautiful haiku, thanks for shasring

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Shakil Ahmed 01 December 2015

yes when sun sets moon appears in the sky but still darkness falls in the ground, beautiful haiku, thanks forshasring

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