Setting sun planning
to rest in the arms of moon
darkness will dance now
well.. this is not a proper haiku, dear Asim - metaphors/similes should be avoided in classical haiku
Lovely haiku! With sunset, darkness spreads. Though moon is there, sun is asleep!
Such a pretty haiku.rising of night and sun setting always Fascinate the writer.
yes when sun sets moon appears in the sky but still darkness falls in the ground, beautiful haiku, thanks for shasring
yes when sun sets moon appears in the sky but still darkness falls in the ground, beautiful haiku, thanks forshasring
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