M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,672 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku - 30 Setting Sun - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Setting sun planning
to rest in the arms of moon
darkness will dance now

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature

Form: Haiku


Comments about Haiku - 30 Setting Sun by M. Asim Nehal

  • Fabrizio Frosini (5/19/2016 8:35:00 AM)


    well.. this is not a proper haiku, dear Asim - metaphors/similes should be avoided in classical haiku (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (12/3/2015 3:12:00 AM)


    Lovely haiku! With sunset, darkness spreads. Though moon is there, sun is asleep! (Report) Reply

  • Free Bird (12/1/2015 10:51:00 AM)


    Such a pretty haiku.rising of night and sun setting always Fascinate the writer. (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/1/2015 10:06:00 AM)


    yes when sun sets moon appears in the sky but still darkness falls in the ground, beautiful haiku, thanks for shasring (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/1/2015 10:04:00 AM)


    yes when sun sets moon appears in the sky but still darkness falls in the ground, beautiful haiku, thanks forshasring (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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