Haiku 34 - Rain Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 34 - Rain

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Clouds carry water pots
Thunder, mischievous, throw stones
Broken pots pour down

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thunder breaks something making loud sound
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 17 June 2020

Absolutely brilliant....... thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Thank you Anjandev Roy. Dogs are dear to all. But why not the masters teach them to be descent with strangers?

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2020

Great haiku.Very imaginative Sir. Enjoyed.

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Thank you very dear AKP.. The imagery is significant in drought affted areas where water is brought in pots from distant places by the female folks

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Thank you dear AKP for the elating comments

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2020

Rain from the heavens watering the earth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you dear Edward To imaginikewuse is a pleasure

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Thank you very much dear Edward. The mischievous boys of rural India still get opportunities to put holes to pots and drain the milk inside

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2020

Thunder, mischievous, throw stones Broken pots pour down..Your mind is full of imagination.. leading the reader to a wonderfland.

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Thank you Dr. Tony for kindling my imagination. I was really thinking how Lord Krishna in his childhood.put holes to the milk pots the Gopikas used to carry

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