Haiku 34 - Rain Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 34 - Rain

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Clouds carry water pots
Thunder, mischievous, throw stones
Broken pots pour down

Wednesday, May 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,haiku,rain,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thunder breaks something making loud sound
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 17 June 2020

Absolutely brilliant....... thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Thank you Anjandev Roy. Dogs are dear to all. But why not the masters teach them to be descent with strangers?

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2020

Great haiku.Very imaginative Sir. Enjoyed.

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Thank you very dear AKP.. The imagery is significant in drought affted areas where water is brought in pots from distant places by the female folks

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Thank you dear AKP for the elating comments

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2020

Rain from the heavens watering the earth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you dear Edward To imaginikewuse is a pleasure

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Thank you very much dear Edward. The mischievous boys of rural India still get opportunities to put holes to pots and drain the milk inside

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2020

Thunder, mischievous, throw stones Broken pots pour down..Your mind is full of imagination.. leading the reader to a wonderfland.

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Thank you Dr. Tony for kindling my imagination. I was really thinking how Lord Krishna in his childhood.put holes to the milk pots the Gopikas used to carry

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