Haiku 5 And Haiku 5 Revised (Morning) Poem by Savita Tyagi
Haiku 5 And Haiku 5 Revised (Morning)
sun light filters through
city's high rise building-gloom
a tear in despair!5 7 5
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Sun light filtering through
Gloom of high rise city buildings
A tear in despair!
I read Haiku 3,4,5. You fulfill the form with substantive comment, these are resonant poems - and that resonance is what the haiku aims for. You hit the target everytime.
In trying to filter through, the sunlight seems to cut through the buildings. Beautiful presentation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/29/2024 10:02:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful flight of imagery that compares filtered sun rise in a high rise with a tear in despair. Thanks for sharing.