Haiku - 70 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 70

Rating: 5.0


roaring spring sea
snail emerging from the shell
the wild geese returns

Friday, June 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. D K Kandaglli 26 June 2021

Another wonderful haiku. Three elements of life nice work.

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T Rajan Evol 04 July 2016

Brilliant haiku, I agree with Daniel's comment, You deserve a bigger platform to showcase your talent.

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Daniel Brick 25 June 2016

Brilliant Haiku! You take things from distant spaces and different scales to show the simultaneity of life. You have the instinct for the Haiku Form by stating things but not interpreting them for the reader. We readers have to be alert, find the right wave-length, think it through. Have you heard about the New Ebook of Haiku co-edited by Fabrizio Frosini and others (I help out by writing the Introductions) . Contact Fabrizio and submit five of your Haiku.You deserve a bigger audience.

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M Asim Nehal 25 June 2016

Thank you so much Daniel for your wonderful and encouraging comments, Infact I have contributed some poems that got published in Poets against Inequality, By Land and By Sea- Refugee and also for Haiku, Tanka and Taoist and planning to contribute for the two new projects as well. I have seen your foreword and awesome commentaries........Thanks once again.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 June 2016

Seeing the beauty of life! In the eyes of nature. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 24 June 2016

The last line should read The wild geese return But still a lovely Haiku

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