Haiku - 69 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 69

Rating: 5.0


solitary death
maple leave on the graveyard
unburried on burried

Haiku - 69
Monday, June 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2016

Life and death! Nature in action. Thanks for sharing.

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 June 2016

Ab to ghabra ke ye kahte hai ke mar jaayenge Mar ke bhi chain na paaya to kidhar jaayenge Zauq ke ghazal ka ye sher yaad aagaya... bohot hi naazuk khayaal. dheron daad.10

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M Asim Nehal 20 June 2016

Zehnaseeb..Kanton ko murjhane ka khauf nahi hota.... Bahut Shuriya, badi meherbani.

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2016

Excellent haiku on its own, but with the photo it is a 10+

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Dr. D K Kandaglli 26 June 2021

V classic

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Nosheen Irfan 23 June 2016

Wowww. You have nailed it. How wonderfully you illustrate life and death.10

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T Rajan Evol 22 June 2016

Immortalised it.10

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Ari Alsio 20 June 2016

under the big pen wrapped in swaddling clothes the general birth 10+

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2016

~Excellent haiku on its own, but with the photo it is a 10+

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