Haiku - Dewdrops Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Dewdrops

Rating: 5.0


scent of this harvest
some unfulfilled promises
hanging on dewdrops

Thursday, November 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

This excellent poem deserves full voting. But previews two votes given by other two visitors are miserable and certainly I express my grief and dissatisfaction on previous votes given to this poem by unknown visitors or poets.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2018

Thanks Much Sir, Users are free to rate, as they interpret poems, to me comments are important as it helps me to improve and sharpen my writing skills.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

We come in contact with dewdrops during winter season. Dewdrops give us nice feelings. We feel that unfulfilled promises which are hung can be fulfilled through lovely harvesting. Excellent Haiku is very well penned.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2018

Superb Interpretation, Thank u so much for your generous appreciation.

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T Rajan Evol 28 July 2020

Wow wow wow hanging on the dew drops

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 November 2018

The grass expels the unwanted body fluid through a process called guttation... A nice haiku of the current season. With best wishes PC

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2018

Few words, dewdrops...somehow really something i like a lot..beautiful one :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 November 2018

What a brilliant juxtaposition! Lovely imagery, too! I hope next year's harvest will fruitful!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 November 2018

wow is the only WORD I know as KUMARAMANI ji HAS COMMENTED TWICE He is PH 's WELL WISHER all must know it Even though he has blacklisted me w/o telling me 10 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=please

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