Haiku: Hose Pipe Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Haiku: Hose Pipe

Rating: 5.0

Terminal open;
Hose pipe under high pressure
dancing on the lawn!

Dated: 29th Jan 2022.





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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 30 January 2022

Vivid imagery, great write.5**

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 January 2022

Thank you dear friend....

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David Wood 29 January 2022

Interesting Haiku, I can actually see it!

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 January 2022

Thank you very much... PC

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Sandra Feldman 29 January 2022

We can see it/ We can feel it. That's the magic of well written Haikus. Love the good ones!

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 January 2022

Thank you so much for the complements.... Stay safe/PC

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 January 2022

i can imagine it

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 January 2022

thank you my dear....stay safe/pc

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