Sunday, January 22, 2023

Haiku … Strength Comments

Rating: 5.0

When all may seem lost,
Just stay strong and carry on,
It's the only way.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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M. Asim Nehal 23 January 2023

Nice Senryu. Liked it.

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Rob Lamberton 23 January 2023

"When all may seem lost, " I see SEEM as significant! Sincere appreciation for this great poem!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 January 2023

if left nothing for thyself then carry on ahead lonely

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Anjandev Roy 22 January 2023

Great haiku...... optimistic........thank u...

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Jayne Louise Davies 23 January 2023

Thank you Anjandev! I appreciate your comments x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 January 2023

Jayne this is excellent haiku

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Jayne Louise Davies 23 January 2023

Thank you LeeAnn x So appreciated.

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David Wood 22 January 2023

Or, have a cup of tea, it'll be alright in the morning! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 23 January 2023

Yes nothing like a cup of tea David. Works wonders! : )

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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