It's an absolute nonsense in the name of haiku. A haiku contains 17 syllables while it has only 7. The structure is not correct.
I'm surprised at the wit of people how it got 31 votes and also occupied a place in top 500 poems. It should be removed at once.
The American Haiku is not exactly the Japanese
Haiku. The Japanese Haiku is strictly disciplined
to seventeen syllables but since the language
structure is different I don't think American
Haikus (short three-line poems intended to be
completely packed with Void of Whole) should worry
about syllables because American speech is
something again...bursting to pop.
Above all, a Haiku must be very simple and free
of all poetic trickery and make a little picture
and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi
this isnt a hiaku i am deeply offended and telling my mom
tell her your faking and that this poem is so good and great.: -)
I think poems like these are great. They teach you to respect nature and to be grateful. Pls share.
greatly crafted ///awesome
Tear or taste of rain
Crawling into veins of heart
Ocean or saline
peepee S U C C esketit
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