Jack Kerouac
Lowell, Massachusetts
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Haiku (The Low Yellow...)

Rating: 3.4
The low yellow
moon above the
Quiet lamplit house.
COMMENTS
Britte Ninad 31 March 2019
great writings..............................
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Mahtab Bangalee 10 March 2019
yellow moon slowly as the yolk lit up the body house of monk!
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Jasmine 13 May 2018
Mack it was to sot
1 4 Reply
kaitlin s 17 April 2018
this is not a haiku, get it together tf
8 6 Reply
havana oonana 27 February 2018
please check your counting this poem is 4,4,5 and a haiku is 5,7,5 thanks bubye
11 5 Reply
Lucille rebottom 27 February 2018
ummm this is wrong a haiku is 5 7 5 yours is 4 4 5 smh: (((
5 1 Reply
Shaka Moundiessdfjrud 27 February 2018
Umm you did not do this right. This is not how you write a Haiku
7 1 Reply
Lucille redbottom 27 February 2018
umm i thought a haiku was 5 7 5, your poem is 4 4 5: ((((((it doesn't make sense
3 0 Reply
miranda jones 27 February 2018
THIS IS NOT A HAIKU THIS IS TOTALLY WRONG it is 5 7 5 not 4 4 5
7 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018
Beautiful Haiku nicely brought forth.
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