in the dark
Love haiku's, so short, simple and sweet!
A haiku contains 17 syllables in just 3 lines. The first two lines contain 10 syllables(5 each) and the third one contains 7. The poem doesn't meet the criteria of a haiku. Therefore it shouldn't be called a haiku. It may be an expression composed well.
Anyone who sticks to the 5-7-5 syllable rule knows nothing or is outmoded. Even the haiku of Basho when translated in English ignore the rule. Modern haiku could be 1 or 21 syllables.
Great imagery and nice haiku,
Kerouac and Ginsberg
On the road
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This gave me the best work ever it really helped thanks a lot matey
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great craftsman the Jack Kerouac
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