Jack Kerouac
Lowell, Massachusetts
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Haiku (Birds Singing...)

Rating: 3.3
Birds singing
in the dark
—Rainy dawn.
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dog 26 March 2021
this poem is
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justin 27 January 2021
dude you're dog water
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Aamena 05 January 2021
This gave me the best work ever it really helped thanks a lot matey
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bird bird bird bird bird bird bird bird bird bird bird
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Britte Ninad 19 November 2019
great craftsman the Jack Kerouac
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Margie Marques 12 January 2019
I'm sorry, Jack Kerouac. I love you, but your Haiku is a fail. Line 1-presents a problem. Line 2- solves it. Line 3- shows thankfulness.
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Margie Marques 12 January 2019
Leaves are crispy brown. If only sweet rain would fall Leaves would smile again
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Margie Marques 12 January 2019
This is not a correctly written Haiku. Line 1-pose a grievance or issue. Line 3- thankfulness. Line 2- connects both and 3. Line 1 and 3-five syllables. Line 2- seven syllables.
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Nicole Settimi 11 March 2019
Can I ask you something? Are you speaking of the traditional haiku? Because I have read there are many different versions of the haiku. I would like to understand this more efficiently.
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Nicole Settimi 11 March 2019
I always knew the traditional syllable count, but did not understand the structure further than that. Or that this was the only " type" of haiku anyway.
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Suzon Albert 19 November 2018
Lovely one...............................10
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Chloe Ashby 21 August 2018
The sun is a ball It shines in the sky so bright It is a fires flame
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Chloe Ashby 21 August 2018
I like it Alan F
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Margie Marques 12 January 2019
Nice Haiku and correct form.
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