Haikus (The Night) Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Haikus (The Night)

Rating: 4.3


I dreamt of
Signature of light,
In the book of the night.

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At the far end of the night,
The dawn smiles
At the last star.

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Someone sings at a distance,
In the ocean of the night
The moon sinks.

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It's the last quarter of the night,
On the cold wet floor
The moonbeams were sleeping.

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Let me write a dream,
The night of troubles is long
Let me create a moon.


(1987, Translated from Urdu into English by Dr.M.Q. Khan, Gaya, India)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 October 2009

You have written extraordinary chapters in your book of the night, Naseer. There is something about the moon that draws the pen of the poet. You sometimes remind me of the great Yiddish poet, Menke Katz. My favorite haiku is the last one.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

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Seema Aarella 15 October 2009

Loved ur summation of night...moods and methods, excellent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

5 wonderful reading haikus of variations of the night and the moon.a 10+++

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

Wowww Naseer sir! ! ! This is quite different from your usual style of writing.. I didn't expect this from you when I visited your page.. Yet, I really did enjoy this lovely write.. You restored tranquility to my boiling mind(I mean kinda tired these days) ....10++ take care Shan

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Dear poet, Someone sings at a distance, In the ocean of the night The moon sinks. wonderful haiku indeed. The song must be a lonely voice which is heard by moon only. nature only understand the nature. The mankind always searches by his knowledge. The poets always searches by his heartiest feelings. thank u poet for such a great poem. now I can realize the song in the middle of sea....

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Felicia Moira Longman 28 February 2016

kool. i love every words from it 💛

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* Sunprincess * 04 May 2014

..these are truly beautiful and leaves a wonderful image in the mind....great write..

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Alison Cassidy 30 October 2009

Eloquent and succinct - your Haikus leave behind a pool of stillness in the mind. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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They are all so creative and if I had to choose I would say the second and the fourth Haikus would be. Wonderful pictures are created of the night for me to savour. 10 Karin

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