Half-Sunbathing In A Sea-Cave (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Half-Sunbathing In A Sea-Cave (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


the ocean ripples
at abandoned rocky walls—
salty tastes its trace

Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: seaside,sunshine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 20 November 2015

Calm Before Current Surges ebb flow tidal seas calm before current surges lulling us before sucking forth our souls in hot sublime salted skin in oceans of our basking minds Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Half-Sunbathing In A Sea-Cave' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2015

Superb Haiku......Great imagery.Liked it MP....10

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Terry Craddock 14 October 2015

ebb flow tidal seas calm before current surges lulling us before sucking forth our souls in hot sublime salted skin in the oceans of our minds :)

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