Halloween Hollow Man Poem by M.J. Lemon

Halloween Hollow Man

Rating: 4.9


when the doorbell rings
and you hear grunts and breaths swell
...pray there's no one there

Wednesday, October 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: entertainment,halloween
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

I went to a house to see HALLOWEEN AN OLD LADY GOT OFF HER CHARIOT AND QUERIED IS HE DEAD YET HAPPY HOLLOW WEEN

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Mj Lemon 26 October 2019

The chariot! ! The horror, the horror! Thanks, Poet. And Happy Hollow Ween.

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Leeann Azzopardi 22 October 2019

this poem sent chills down my back. Very frightening

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Mj Lemon 22 October 2019

Thank you, LeeAnn! Chills means mission accomplished.

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Susan Williams 24 March 2019

now this a difficult thing to do in very few words and syllables but you accomplished it! ! ! you gave me chills with a senyru! ! ! ! ! ! excellent! ! ! ! of course! ! ! ! ! and a perfect title to set the tone! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++s

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Mj Lemon 25 March 2019

So good to hear that there were chills! Thank you so very much, Susan.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Ha ha as long it's not a grizzly bear as it sounds and seems in your funtastic poem then u may open the door. A fun Halloween poem. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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Mj Lemon 13 December 2018

Thank you so very much! I am happy you appreciated the humour. And yes, I live in a part of the world where a grizzly just might be a possibility..

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Muhammad Ali 29 November 2018

Hi friend. Pray there is no one there. But feel the fear both ways. Sometimes life is just fear. Nice poem

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Mj Lemon 29 November 2018

Thank you, Muhammad...as long as the fear is mutual, perhaps there may be joy and reconciliation. Thanks again, my friend.

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