He Left It Alone Poem by M.J. Lemon

He Left It Alone

Rating: 5.0


Do an homage
to a part of the self
that leaves some mystery
why this not that?
Never give up
or be like that guy
the other guy
the one who never does anything
he loved his liver and wanted to share
but found himself talking to despair
So much desire was there
but he shrugged, ended up saying
'I can't see it, feel it, touch it
or play with it in any way! '
So he left it alone
Forgot about it
just walked away
failing to share
his legacy stays bare

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 14 January 2021

I C the new PH has also affected your liver as mine equally i have seen a fall how about MMJL YE

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

Thank you Poet. I hope it is not too late for our livers!

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Richard Wlodarski 21 March 2021

Your inspirational poem motivates me to do even more!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

This is interesting fine muse, i liked the despair line and legacy line a lot. We should all try to share, thoughts and gifts. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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M Asim Nehal 19 January 2021

The truth of life, struggle is part and parcel of this life. Real morale booster to stay and fight.5***

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M.J. Lemon 19 January 2021

Thank you so very much, Asim. And yes, without the fight, we are certain, one day, to disappear....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2021

An excellent write! A mind body tussle- that's life. Thanks Mark.....5 stars

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M.J. Lemon 15 January 2021

Absolutely, Geeta! The mind body challenge. Perhaps they will, one day, become elements that cooperate. Thank you so very much.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 January 2021

this poem was a joy to read Bravo!

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M.J. Lemon 14 January 2021

So good to have you say that. Many thanks, LeeAnn.

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