Hands Across The Sea Poem by alan brown

Hands Across The Sea

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Hands across the Sea

It started during war time
when the world had gone quite mad
And everyone was killing
the ones they were told were bad.

But every war has its good side
and everyone its bad.
So lets not blame each other
as that just sounds quite sad.

Instead of fighting each other
join our hands across the sea
and fight to save each other
In perfect harmony.

Lets give food to the hungry
and help to save the poor
And we could live our lives together
of this I am quit sure.

So lets think of the future
and not just of the past
and forgive all the ones we fought with
Then there can be peace in the world at last.

So get together on PoemHunter
and spread the words I've said
Across the sea, s and oceans
And in your own homestead.

Wednesday, April 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: charity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bipasha D 22 April 2018

Lovely theme... I liked the rhyme and rhythm of the poem too.

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Bharati Nayak 17 April 2018

Instead of fighting each other join our hands across the sea and fight to save each other In perfect harmony. - - - - - Such a beautiful thought ! ! Let us join hands to make the world a better place.

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Carl Roussell 12 April 2018

Good message in this poem, and I really like the last stanza.

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The peaceful one 11 April 2018

This prayer is the need of our times

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