Happiness Poem by Garfield Grimmett

Happiness

Rating: 4.9


Happiness is state of the mind not a feel
many people believe happiness is not real
people say you can reach it but you have to work for it
i believe happiness is here but you just dont know it
happiness cant be bought touched or owned
happiness is a rare commodity that can take a life time to realize
people can recieve happiness through another ones eyes
its a state of peaceful bliss its a high that most people miss
i cant see it nor salvage it, i dont think it will come to me in an instance
but at least i can see hapiness in the distance

copyright 2008 Garfield Grimmett

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 28 January 2009

What greater gift could anyone ask of life than happiness? Without it, what would anything else mean? Great write my friend. Best wishes Richard

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Joseph Poewhit 28 January 2009

That is what many, many many, seek in this life.[ Funny, but most people created there own hells ]

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Vernon Eaker 29 January 2009

A wonderful example of writing, fine descriptive piece.

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Absent Wryta 29 January 2009

Great poem. An underlying little bit of sadness. Its nicely written flows beautifully. I love the ending. Full of hope.

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Lisa French 28 January 2009

This is really good! I like how it's showing how you see happiness compared to others in a way. Excellent work! ! 10

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Jessica Robert 21 August 2009

Wonderful, I adore the waay you describe happiness (: It's incredible. H&K's - j e s s i c a ♥

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Smiley Hooker 19 August 2009

i love the spirit of this write...very positive! thanks for sharing happy moments with us :)

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*Innocent Angel* 29 January 2009

Happiness is what this poem shows and I can tell happiness is how you felt when you wrote it

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happiness is the feel you get after reading good poetry.. this made me happy

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 29 January 2009

very descriptive. yeah, very truthful words with possitive thinking.Convey a vauable message to the reader.

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