Dark cloud eminently cover,
Cobweb annoyingly hover
where sunlight could've win some smiles
And pollinators could've bring new fruits,
Giants trees the hurricane uproot
And forced us to deserted miles.
Rain upon rain our shelter shattered
And food baskets completely emptied,
Our doors; hunger knock like the lender,
Round and round the wind unkind
Now blows as the monkey mind
But like the stubborn fly we won't surrender.
They scared us with wind,
We showed them whirlwind
They held our feet back
To pebble us with pebble
But never did we tremble.
Because we are hard to crack!
Elegantly crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. Insightful, motivational and thought-provoking. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD.
CONGRATS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! 5 Stars full score!
A great inspirational poem.A strong and determined mind can tackle the hurdles successfully.Congratulations for this wonderful poem.
Belated Congrats on POD, Okim! This truly inspirational poem is very deserving of such a great honour!
I'm also grateful to everyone for your kind comments. God bless you all
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Undaunted mind that rises above all obstacles. Marvellous and meaningful poem.