Hard To Crack Poem by Okim Otu

Hard To Crack

Rating: 4.7


Dark cloud eminently cover,
Cobweb annoyingly hover
where sunlight could've win some smiles
And pollinators could've bring new fruits,
Giants trees the hurricane uproot
And forced us to deserted miles.

Rain upon rain our shelter shattered
And food baskets completely emptied,
Our doors; hunger knock like the lender,
Round and round the wind unkind
Now blows as the monkey mind
But like the stubborn fly we won't surrender.

They scared us with wind,
We showed them whirlwind
They held our feet back
To pebble us with pebble
But never did we tremble.
Because we are hard to crack!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Undaunted mind ready to take up the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Undaunted mind that rises above all obstacles. Marvellous and meaningful poem.

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Top score for this rhyming beauty.......

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2022

Elegantly crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. Insightful, motivational and thought-provoking. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD.

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Jayne Louise Davies 24 May 2022

A good write. Well deserved POD. Well done.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 May 2022

CONGRATS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! 5 Stars full score!

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Bharati Nayak 26 July 2022

A great inspirational poem.A strong and determined mind can tackle the hurdles successfully.Congratulations for this wonderful poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 July 2022

Belated Congrats on POD, Okim! This truly inspirational poem is very deserving of such a great honour!

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Dorcas Tayire 01 June 2022

This is such a beautiful piece, i enjoyed the read.

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Okim Otu 24 May 2022

I'm also grateful to everyone for your kind comments. God bless you all

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Okim Otu 24 May 2022

I'm excited my poem have finally made it to the top as member POD.

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