Hardy Canna By The River Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Hardy Canna By The River

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The shore grows with hardy canna, river thawed
I believe everything is going to be tender …
Would there be someone coming to hold my hand
The shore grows with hardy canna, river thawed
Who can capture the vernal queen as a winner
A splendid time is elapsing along with quicksand

The shore grows with hardy canna, river thawed
I believe everything is going to be tender …

Tuesday, May 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anne Yun 31 May 2016

Yes, everything is going to be tender, as the thawed river and the hardy canna. It feels so nice.

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Daniel Brick 20 May 2016

I love your line I BELIEVE EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE TENDER. It is a wonderful act of faith in the goodness of events, and I believe it too. I was surprised at first, then surprise gave way to a strrong desire this could be true, and then I just embraced it completely. Then the line WHO CAN CAPTURE THE VERNAL QUEEN AS A WINNER grabbed me. It's a beautiful image of spring which requires a Goddess or a Princess to preside over the rituals of the season. As I look at all the green growth around me here in Minnesota I realize that VERNAL QUEEN is that green growth, she is present in every lawn, tree, flower patch, every thing that promotes life after winter's barrenness. Of course, you see the same triumph of spring in China!

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 May 2016

Hi Cigeng, The shore grows with hardy canna River Thawed the beautiful imagery is the right/apt prologue to your wish: I believe everything is going to be tender Would there be someone coming to hold my hand! Nice poem. enjoyed reading, re-reading, re-re-reading! Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 May 2016

Yes! Someone will be there for you. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 19 May 2016

A very lovely poem, Cigeng.

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