Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Harmony Around - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Harmony around

We had never been cruel
it went on so well
There was no greed to fall
No warning on wall

It was simple
Without any struggle
Lovely people around
Fragrance all over to be found

wE loved them in garden
As it looked part of heaven
No plan, no painting, no color design
Simply nature's reign

Until we changed atmosphere
Added new dimension of fear
Created pain in to bear
Only voice of curses to hear

No, it was not the life we wanted
It was not the peace we hunted
We did not call single person in street
It was harmony on ground to wish and greet

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Comments about Harmony Around by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2015 9:29:00 AM)


    ana Eid Beautiful.
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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/30/2015 2:26:00 AM)


    No, it was not the life we wanted
    It was not the peace we hunted
    We did not call single person in street
    It was harmony on ground to wish and greet - - Beautiful poetic lines, well penned thanks for sharing.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2015 1:38:00 AM)


    No, it was not the life we wanted
    It was not the peace we hunted
    We did not call single person in street
    It was harmony on ground to wish and greet
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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