Hasta La Vista Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Hasta La Vista

Rating: 4.8


The dawn of Tigris soaks with burnt blood
Clamps every soul
Allures every moment of grilling madness
Each dropp of boiling tears
Reflect a living hell
No more sign of hungry Vultures above

Reincarnation will haunt tormentors
You can run but the ghost of you will never rest

The death arena cries and floods your sins
The sunrise of punitive horizon cracks

Till the end of Earth
The naive color of red
Will be the effigy of premature death
When the lips of the skies
Kiss the fragile ground
Until the seeing
Hasta la vista

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 14 May 2009

Matcha! This is an unusual poem from you; which so much power and surrealistic images, ghastly enshroudment..........terrific Matcha! You can do that(love) and this too with equal dexerity.

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Don Pengilly 14 May 2009

Wow very thought provoking

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 May 2009

From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 5/13/2009 2: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hi mary no sound no picture? ? ? The anger and the violence leap out of this poem, Sulaiman. Beautifully expressed, but please allow us a little hope! Mary

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Gabi Ngubeni 14 May 2009

I love the way you have used your words, strong emotions coming through. Beautiful work man!

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Bright Rose 13 May 2009

Sulaiman, honestly, WOW, very well written, absolutely awesome, loved the title, loved ypur well chosen words and your tone was sooooooooooo convincing, Brilliant and so artistic, you are truly gifted :) keep it up

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I liked your words... I touched a profound meaning really great!

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Prasetya Utama 11 June 2009

Reincarnation and sins, both of human acts who never lost after life. Nice and dept meaning poem.

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Carol Mccann 25 May 2009

Full of emotion and violence, extremely well portrayed.

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Abdul Karim 25 May 2009

Meaningful Write, well defined,

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Innocent Seilane 18 May 2009

The 'Death arena cries and floods your sins' wow this poem has combined poetic technique and critical thinking, thanks for reminding me to read it i really liked it 10+

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